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PostSubject: Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken.   Fri Sep 02, 2011 12:14 am

Comments, criticism, pie-throwing and general observations for my story, "Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken," can go here. I have only recently restarted my story, and so I might be able to get out one new chapter every couple days. It's a little slow, but it's fairly obvious that my chapters get a little long... Razz Anyway, enjoy! And by all means, don't hold anything back!
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PostSubject: Re: Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken.   Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:01 am

Wonderful story, Extreme!
I love how you chose a humble origin for character.
And he isn't some crazy powerful god, or anything.
Great job, keep it up!

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PostSubject: Re: Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken.   Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:30 am

Nice story so far, Extreme. Good job! *Thumbs Up*

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PostSubject: Re: Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken.   Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:47 pm

"We must kill Ruptor..."
I was like "OHHHH!!!"
"...And his apprentice"
'I WAS LIKE "AAHHHH!!"!
So, anyway, I never cease to be impressed with your story...
...but will it blend?

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PostSubject: Re: Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken.   Wed Sep 14, 2011 5:40 pm

What do you mean by blend? Blend in with what is going on in-game, or blend together so it doesn't sound like two seperate stories?
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PostSubject: Re: Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken.   Wed Sep 14, 2011 8:47 pm

It is a joke.
IT is a popular phrase in art, and I say it a lot.

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PostSubject: Re: Petros Ferrarius: A Life Broken.   Wed Sep 14, 2011 11:55 pm

I did not know that. Razz But now that you connect it with art, I do kind-of get it...hmm...*scratches invisible beard thoughtfully*
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