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Dart Ichimonji
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PostSubject: just a quickwrite   Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:58 am

Kinda got inspired by a poem from a beat artist, cant remember her name. Tried to go for a lot of internal rhyme. also got asked to perform this one.

Of all the places we can't choose to live in,
I'm glad i lived here,
glad to see such green grass lined with
the bottles of beer because nobody
really cares and it makes my hairs
stand on end.
I'm glad i get to see the stars that
keep disappearing and experince the
betrayal of a friend, glad that we can
voice our opinions to the politician who's
a little hard of hearing unless he
see's a little green, and you know
what i mean when I say "seize the day"
because night will come but if there's no stars
then it's no fun.

But, I must admit that I'm omitting
the things I truly love.
I love that I can see the stars before
they disappear, because while they're here
I can lay in the grass, make up stories as I see them
I love old fashioned cookouts, where theres
always the drunk uncle screaming YEEEEE-HAWWWWW
while he's making the food to feed us all.
And I love the touch of a lady.
I like living here, and for that,
I think I'm crazy.

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PostSubject: Re: just a quickwrite   Thu Apr 11, 2013 8:17 am

Sounds like a nice and random poem all right. BTW, is this a carpe diem poem? (Seize the day part)

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PostSubject: Re: just a quickwrite   Fri Apr 12, 2013 7:06 pm

meh, not really. I kinda just tried to play off the whole night and day thing I was doing

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