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Tigirosa
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PostSubject: Thoughts   Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:51 am

Why exactly me
From the whole world
This eternal games
Of First crossroads?
They don`t have beginning
Neither the end
Nor a solution
And do not have weight
Only questions and thoughts
Which together runs
Which take away
Into oblivion
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PostSubject: Re: Thoughts   Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:14 pm

nice, like the last line especially. Ominous, dark....good.

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PostSubject: Re: Thoughts   Sat Apr 06, 2013 5:54 am

Good poem! The overall composition/ structure is quite nice and philosophical. Cool

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PostSubject: Re: Thoughts   Sat Apr 06, 2013 9:22 am

I don't pretend to know anything about poetry, but I'm pretty sure this is a great poem! It actually got me to think, and something that can achieve that must be powerful.
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PostSubject: Re: Thoughts   Sun Apr 07, 2013 10:49 am

Thank you. In fact, this is my first poem that I've ever written in the English language Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Thoughts   Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:33 am

ah, well not bad. And now, I think I shall have to post something. Can't have you guys outdoing me on my own idea now can I? Razz

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