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Gengkiskan
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PostSubject: Love   Fri Mar 16, 2012 7:55 am

Love is mysterious
Red, red love is beautiful
It is so welcoming
I dwell in love always
For there is love everywhere

Love is in my heart
Love is like a red, red rose
That wraps around me
It is forever pretty
Love is as pretty now

My dear I love you
You make me love the world more
The world is bold pink to me
Loves cover all of my sense
To me, Love is eternal

Love is mysterious
Red, red love is beautiful
It is so welcoming
I dwell in love always
For there is love everywhere

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PostSubject: Re: Love   Thu May 24, 2012 6:46 pm

I think, by the way you write about love, you may have found it, despite its mysteriousness.
Also, I like that, at the end, you write the same thing as at the beginning. As they say, repetition is poetic.

In fact, insanity is doing the same thing over and over while expecting something different to happen, making insanity repetition, making insanity poetic. Very Happy Random thought.

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PostSubject: Re: Love   Thu May 24, 2012 10:22 pm

Awesome, I totally agree with you to in the repetition of poetry and insanity. Sometimes, insanity is poetic, and we all love insanity, doesn't we? Twisted Evil

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PostSubject: Re: Love   Thu May 24, 2012 11:28 pm

Indeed!

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PostSubject: Re: Love   Fri May 25, 2012 6:38 am

But sadly, I still doesn't have found love yet and still on the path of finding the person who will walk beside me and accompany me in the aspects of my life. (No girlfriend yet Sad)

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PostSubject: Re: Love   Wed Mar 20, 2013 12:26 pm

I know that I do not have to say this but all things come with time Smile

Anyway, good poem
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PostSubject: Re: Love   Thu Mar 21, 2013 5:41 am

Thanks, this is a Tanka poem from the 30 something poems that I do as a project for my teacher. Glad that someone like it.

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PostSubject: Re: Love   Thu Mar 21, 2013 7:17 am

your welcome Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Love   Mon Mar 25, 2013 5:59 pm

Nice poem, Genkiskan. Btw, in my opinion you should change your font color back to red. It was better and easier to read. Smile
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