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Dart Ichimonji
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PostSubject: Mind mania   Wed Feb 29, 2012 2:17 am

I put a setting to what I think my mind would look like (Real one)



My mind carries cracks of wood in the wind

and the mellow songs of crickets in the grass

a full moon and stars, a night with no end

and two of me, kicking each others ass

two imprints in the grass, with only one occupied

my arm outstretched to the empty space

the grass, like normal, but amplified

soft, and no bugs to jump on your face



My mind

is my solace, my only escape

there, I can wish for truths to change

underneath the nights dark drape

my place to train, both physical, and mental exchange

no civilization in sight, just a hill with a sky

a dirt circle on top

and of course there's you, and I.

take a load off, have a pop

but I charge, only one match

humor me, give it all your all

be warned, no escape hatch

just us, no backup to call

don't be serious, have fun, let loose

who cares who wins, not me

why bother, grudges hold no use

grab a sword, and let's be free



my mind

shifts and I'm lost

I scream, an attempt for control

I'm here, with reason the cost

but I don't remember passing a toll

Run, the stairs lead nowhere

only deeper in, to more paintings of chaos

voices scream, go crazy, don't care

make them fear, make them experience loss



chains rattle, a locked door shakes

hold it shut, gotta stay me

carry on, through the quakes

a growl, an angry plea

my mind Crumbles

my mind Restores

my mind

my mind

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Ameril Mirinder
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Location : In your nightmare's second worse nightmare. I'm not in it's first worse nightmare because that one is filled with nigh-invincible paladins.

PostSubject: Re: Mind mania   Sun Mar 04, 2012 12:23 pm

Yay for insane Ninja Suspect -Berserker Twisted Evil poets study ! I could never imagine even putting together two rhyming words(unless they complete a riddle) so I congratulate you for doing something I know almost nothing about. Also, this is a pretty good, if somewhat insane, poem.
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Dart Ichimonji
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PostSubject: Re: Mind mania   Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:31 pm

thanks

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Gengkiskan
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PostSubject: Re: Mind mania   Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:33 am

Good job Dart, the Shinobi Berserker Poet! farao

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