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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Oct 31, 2011 5:00 pm

You can't just give us a new female character and take her away!
You gotta give her some screen time, make us like her, and THEN you kill her!
Although, I do wonder who killed her...

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:23 pm

ah, but the sheer fact that you want more of her means you DO like her already. Besides, as long as you grasped how important she was then my job is done. I MAY go more in depth with her later though. maybe. either through flash backs or some way he gets to see her again.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Tue Nov 01, 2011 1:00 am

Yo i just read this story and what i can say is that this story is really good wow seriously like story had action and described everything so well I loved it i want to read all DK Stories...I Honestly think that DK are the best Guild with great story tellers/Writers
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Tue Nov 01, 2011 1:34 pm

Thank you, Freedom! (Referring to his last statement.)
That makes me very proud, since I am the leader of the Writer Rangers (IF YOU OTHER RANGERS SAY DIFFERENT, THEN I WOULD REFER YOU TO MY 52 PAGE STORY)
I am also glad you like the library, I run that, too, lol.

And I could only describe the story in better grammar, other than that you said it all, Freedom.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Tue Nov 01, 2011 5:26 pm

ya, i admit, grammar IS my weak point

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:49 pm

Well mi'lord do you think you can make my story about a young Soul Weaver who fought a Entropy & won. but he got scratched by the Entropy & he started to change into a Entropy in the span of 3 days! & you think you can add more stuff in their please Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:22 am

well, while I do think people should make their own story to keep originality, I'll consider it. but only if it's a collaboration effort, that way it can still stay YOUR story.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Thu Mar 15, 2012 11:57 am

Let the joy commence, indeed.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Thu Mar 15, 2012 3:06 pm

yes, quite.



and think i'll change it to "Let the joy commence, Motha-*****"....although not sure if its allowed since its so close to actually saying it...

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:35 am

So Dart, does your Monster Hunter Chronicles have the same format outline as your main story? Like does it comes from sadness to happy ending or happy starts but sad endings?

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:21 pm

More or less yeah, but as much. Sure bad things may happen in MH chronicles -coughs-You'llfindout -coughs- but not nearly as bad as in Darts....only 1 exception where they'll share a similiar tragedy. And Arumat and Sable won't be changed nearly as much as Dart. If you've paid attention, Dart went from just a boy in a village, to killing people in plain sight when he finds it necessary.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:01 am

Shocked That's sure a dramatically scary change...

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Tue Mar 20, 2012 12:55 am

well, experiences can make or break a person. I like my writings to show that Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Tue Mar 20, 2012 6:42 am

Sometimes, you should try to post your stories in blogs and in many websites too, as that a lot of famous writers comes from writing blogs in the internet. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Thu Mar 29, 2012 6:00 pm

nah, my stories are more for fan-fic...not much space for that in publishing....unless of course AE gets hold of it, but seeing as how we're the bad guys I dont think so

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Mar 30, 2012 7:58 am

^Don't get discouraged! Maybe they want an idea for a new bad guy in their new games. Imagine of a main villain of an AE game named "Dart Ichimonji" pirat

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:32 pm

nah, to do that they'd have to make me a part of the staff, and seeing as how I have no experience in anything, wouldnt do. not to mention i'm only 17



uploaded your sword btw

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:48 pm

Where did u put the pic. of my sword?

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:03 pm

in my art gallery, darts armory

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sat Mar 31, 2012 8:21 pm

The pic. is very cool, Dart. And I just finish reading your story and founds it to be really awesome. It goes from a young Dart to a cold-blooded killer Dart, but there're still jokes and puns in serious situations. The strory's plot is also flowing and interesting. king

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:11 am

thx, I try to make it interesting. And rest assured, Darts tale will NEVER get completely serious. Gotta have some comedy to make it not as dark....and serious just isnt my thing.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Apr 02, 2012 4:59 am

The quite sad part for me is when his girlfriend dies. Crying or Very sad

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Apr 02, 2012 2:58 pm

well yeah, that's really the only sad part that's happened....so far.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:57 am

^Cool, your new chap. comes out, I'll try to read it as soon as I have the time.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Apr 08, 2012 3:37 am

yep....becoming a paladin, WHAT A TWIST!

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