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PostSubject: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:59 am

all discussion about the story "Two warriors, one body" should go here, mostly because it'd save a lot of time for people. I welcome any and all kinds of criticism, as well as questions.

I DO plan on continuing it, so more humor, and more pwnage, both by Dart and Ichimonji. As with all writers, I do need time to think of new ideas but I WILL have the rest for you....eventually. Have fun guys Very Happy

EDIT : changed the title


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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:06 am

Okay, Dart. And now I'm bored..... Sad

Edit: AHHHHH!!!!!!! CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:30 am

I have a question, I was having a little trouble understanding something.
Ichimonji is a sword, yes?
Well, it hints, in the story, that Ichimonji has a body parts.
Is it because, Dart turns INTO Ichimonji, whenever he goes berserk?

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:31 am

No. I believe that Ichimonji takes over DART'S body.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:37 am

Yes, that is what I said.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:49 pm

No, you didn't. You said that Ichimonji turns into Dart, while I said that Dart turns into Ichimonji.

We are contradicting.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 1:57 pm

Yep, he takes over Darts body, but can only take over when Dart enters extreme emotional states.
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:19 pm

@Dart:
And that is what I said, but bsteiny won't reread the post and find out that he is wrong.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:35 pm

I know, I was just answering your question Razz

part 2 has now been posted, enjoy
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:35 am

Part 2's pretty awesome.

Also...you really must like pizza alot in real life as well as in here to eat pizza in the blink of an eye.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:18 pm

yes, yes I do, its to the point where im immune to the calories and such gained from eating a whole pizza O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:21 pm

I like pizza too, but not THAT much!

Plus, I'm having a BBQ tonight, so no pizza for me!

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:39 pm

ah, well thats cool too...i guess, but i am fully conviced pizza is the food of the gods.

plus its actually one of the healthiest foods, tomato sauce means you get your veggies, it has diary, bread, and meat. all the more reason to like it -drools-
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:57 pm

About the meat......well, I would tell you why I don't eat meat with dairy, but that would change your whole point of view of me. The whole clan would look at me differently, and would most likely treat me differently.

One hint: Guess why I'm never on on Saturdays?

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:50 pm

I believe I have the answer, but at the safety of your image, i shall keep quiet about it Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:21 pm

Is that so? Care to PM me about you answer?

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:09 pm

Expect Part 3 to come soon, I'm just working with b as his character is in that part
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Sun Aug 21, 2011 11:43 pm

Okay, than let's make a time that we'll meet up or something to talk about it.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Aug 22, 2011 12:05 am

Ok...here's my problem...

b is officially in everyones story now...

I think I might remove him from mine as to avoid the oncoming cliche of having him in every story...
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Aug 22, 2011 12:10 am

k. we meet up already in necro's, and i don't join for a while. so I'm cool with it.

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Aug 22, 2011 12:42 am

Maybe we can get Necro to add u as an ambassador in his story for helping me with something...like maybe helping stop vaal and fixing the gate since Necro blew it up...

It would be easier that way...
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:48 am

Hmmmm......

You can ask him. I don't want to be turned down. It doesn't feel nice. Sad

Anyway, at 12 AM, Vamp and I were working on Bullet, but I had to goto bed. So he had to finish it himself. But the good news is, we got the story done, its better than before, and most of the orginal ideas came from me, as well as some of the recent, new ones. Smile

I really owe you, Vamp. YOU ARE DA MAN!!!!!

I'm now going to go on Call of Duty, and finally be bale to say a Terminator 2 line:

Aim a rifle at a terrorist, and say, "Asta Lavista, Baby!", then pull the trigger. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Wed Aug 24, 2011 6:09 pm

hmmm...well necro gets a mention in my story at least (debating whether to put him in), b's an actual character, so seeing as you're another active forumite vamp you have your choice of being a character or just a mention.....after part 3 comes though of course
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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Thu Aug 25, 2011 12:44 am

I'm tired....really, really, really tired.....

Night!

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PostSubject: Re: Dart Ichimonji : Shared Souls   Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:55 pm

part 3 is up.....after this I'm making more action scenes

part 4 now, fairly happy with it, but its also 3 AM and ive been in the car all night so let me know what you think

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